|discoxwithxme||05/26/09 - 01:15AM||8: Chapter 8Signed|
|I'm so happy I found this story. I found a new favourite author along with it. You are absolutely stunning. The way you wrote this story was perfect. The emotions, the reactions. Flawless. The ending was painfully appropriate. Hope for a happier fic next time though. And I positively love your rendition of what happened to Nick and Sara.|
Author's Response: Thanks so much the really lovely and far too kind review. It means a lot.
|aebhel||05/24/09 - 10:32AM||8: Chapter 8Signed|
|I'm so glad you finished this. I love the image of Nick and Sara sitting in the diner; that kind of calm understanding about what Sara needs is so characteristic of Nick. I love the contrast between that and Sara's bitter defiance, and I think it's great that you didn't just tie it all up neatly--the end is messy, like life. Gorgeous job.|
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I was worried about leaving it so unfinished, but I probably gave Sara a bigger epiphany than was probably in any way realistic. Although, it's been a long time coming for her... Thanks for the very nice review.
|Yoshi||05/24/09 - 05:39AM||8: Chapter 8Signed|
|Just read this in one sitting. You've written a very dark and difficult subject both well and sensitively, capturing the characters accurately, making it so easy to read despite the subject matter. Looking forward to more from you.|
Author's Response: Thanks, Yoshi, for a really lovely comment. I really appreciate you taking the time to let me know that you liked it.
|Lily G||05/23/09 - 08:54PM||8: Chapter 8Signed|
|Very good story, pretty tough subject but you handled it well... Hope there will be a sequel with some happiness for the boys...|
Author's Response: Thanks, Lily, for your nice comment. Yes, there will be more in the same universe which will head in the general direction of happiness.
|CarebearStare18||05/23/09 - 05:09AM||1: Chapter 1Signed|
|I really love this story. It's exciting and subtle and i cant wait to read more.
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I really appreciate your comment.
|aebhel||05/19/09 - 08:28PM||1: Chapter 1Signed|
|Oh, man, this is great. Sharply realized and painful, and I really like the dynamic you have going between Greg, Nick, and Sara--Greg, well-meaning as he is, just doesn't really get it, Nick gets it but isn't all that close to Sara, and Sara's just trying so hard to hold on and barely making it. I really liked the insight about the abuse, too--because it isn't PG-13, and I think you're doing a very good job of dealing with the emotional scars that it can leave on a person. Are you planning to continue this? Because that would be awesome.|
Author's Response: Thank you so much for a stupendously kind review. I started this story on FF.net, because it's my first in the fandom (and second ever), before re-finding WMTDB and thinking that it might be appropriate for here. Next (and probably final) part coming soon and there's a follow-up one-shot already written where romantic revelations are made. Thanks for a lovely comment. You've really made my day.
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