|chicken30||05/27/06 - 07:20AM||10: Hard To Say I'm SorrySigned|
|Aw ... such a sweet chapter ... *sob* and so sad ... loved it ... keep on goin' *lol* ... |
Author's Response: Thanks for the review....:)
|ScarletFBL||05/26/06 - 03:11PM||10: Hard To Say I'm SorrySigned|
|There were SO many things said by Nick and Greg that tugged at my heart. I could see myself saying those things...I HAVE said those things.|
Author's Response: Saying those types of things are always hard:( I think i've also said the exact same things.
|ItGlitters||05/26/06 - 02:24PM||10: Hard To Say I'm SorrySigned|
|Whoot - really excellent! It's very realistic - I mean, they can't just go back to being the way they were can they? Too much stuff has gone down - they still have to work through it... I hope they work through it. :) |
Side Note: there were a lot of run on sentances in there that made it a little hard to read (nothing that I obviously couldn't get past - and I know it's been hard for you to crank out these chapters for your demanding readers ;) You know where to find me if you ever need some help).
Can't wait for more! I'm on the edge of my seat.
Author's Response: Thanks so much, I'm sorry about the run on sentances...I just really have no clue how to fix them..Would you mind taking a quick run over them just to fix it up a little bit...I would so love you forever...thank you for your kinds words *hugs*
|plentyoflove||05/26/06 - 02:14PM||10: Hard To Say I'm SorrySigned|
|That chapter was amazing... finally some hope for the two of them. Definately made me a little teary eyed. |
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review..:)
|Lexi Lou Who||05/26/06 - 01:40PM||10: Hard To Say I'm SorrySigned|
|Aw...It made me cry..Go on!|
Author's Response: Sorry didn't mean to make you cry, more soon i promise
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