| Dr FooFoo | 11/12/04 - 03:55PM | 1: | Signed|
| Hmm, I enjoy the concept muchly, but you neeeed to edit! You have issues with spelling, and some grammar and tense problems, as well. A beta reader would fix all that right up, however, so I suggest you try that. | |||
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