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Reviews for No One is Watching

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Dreama 03/27/06 - 08:12AM 1: 1/1
That's a great start in a week. Very cute, although it's a bit das that Greg will never know that he performed for audience *lol* And it is so great to know that I'm not the only one believing that Greg would wear South Park boxer shorts. Nice work, and so hot.

Author's Response: Maybe it's sad, but we all dance differently when no one is watching, so maybe it's better for him that he didn't know. I totally think Greg would wear South Park boxers, glad that you do too. Glad you enjoyed it and thought it was hot. Thank you. :-D

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gregandnickfan 03/27/06 - 07:05AM 1: 1/1
Wow, i have to say that was very hot. But there is one thing that really bothered me about the story. You used the line Nick took his dick. To me useing that didn't seem to fit the story. Dick is such a trashie word and this story was so well written. I think cock or himself would sound so much better. Please don't take this the wrong way. I did really like the story. Keep it up.

Author's Response: I won't, I know that words can have different effects on different people. I'm sorry it threw you as you read the story. I actually take a lot of time to think about the words I use, but it doesn't mean I always get it right. I was reading a story the other day where the writer had a typo, putting lions instead of loins and I started giggling. It spoile the flow, so I know what you mean. I'm glad that otherwise you found it hot and well written. And thank you for reviewing, I really appreciate it. :-D

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violet_eyes 03/27/06 - 02:51AM 1: 1/1
Oh, I'll start my week with a smile now! Thank you for making my day with this!

Author's Response: Wow, well, glad to start you with a smile. I'm glad you enjoyed it! Thanks. :-D




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